Draft:Battle of Bidar
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The Battle of Bidar that took place in the 18th century. After the death of the Peshwa Madhavrao in 1772, his brother and successor, Narayanrao, was assassinated on August 30, 1773, triggering a civil war among the Marathas.[2][5][6]
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Submission declined on 2 November 2023 by Robert McClenon (talk). This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission. Declined by Robert McClenon 6 months ago. |
- Comment: See comments of reviewer Deb. The lede sentence should say that the battle was in India and what part of India it was in.There is a history of sockpuppetry associated with this draft. If this draft is resubmitted, please check the history and determine whether the submitter is quacking. If so, please take appropriate action, which may include filing a follow-up sockpuppet investigation. This does not mean that the topic is not notable, and it does not mean that the topic is notable. If this draft is resubmitted by a neutral good-faith reviewer, it may be reviewed and accepted based on its content and sources. Robert McClenon (talk) 03:26, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Better context is needed. For example, most readers won't immediately realise that the Maratha-Nizam conflicts took place in India. Nor is there an article by the title "Maratha-Nizam conflicts". Deb (talk) 07:43, 12 July 2023 (UTC)
Quick Facts Battle of Bidar, Date ...
Battle of Bidar | |||||||
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Part of Battles involving the Maratha Empire | |||||||
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Belligerents | |||||||
Maratha Empire |
Nizam of Hyderabad French East India Company | ||||||
Commanders and leaders | |||||||
Raghunathrao Vamanrao |
Asaf Jah 2 Salabat Jung Marquis de Bussy-Castelnau Monsieur Raymond | ||||||
Strength | |||||||
40000[4] | unknown | ||||||
Casualties and losses | |||||||
unknown | heavy | ||||||
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