User:Jpegthebitmap/Maragheh observatory
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-Generally revise and improve overall workflow of the article; the tone of much of the article is too casual, some of it seems opinionated, and some sentences could be combined, rewritten, or otherwise improved.
-Place citation requests where necessary; possibly provide them or contradict and remove/revise uncited statements.
-Additional information on the prominent astronomers/natural philosophers who worked there.
-More information and/or emphasis on the large mural quadrant that was the central feature of the observatory; also explore some other tools/instruments known to have been used
-If you are citing your works, is there any point in also saying sources in the text? (First three sentences of History section; ask Dr. Sheppard.
-Hulagu Khan section: is it even necessary? Seems like too large of a divergence. Possibly cannibalize parts of that section to explain the founding story of the observatory in more detail in the History section.
=Cannibalize Hulagu Khan section and integrate necessary details into History section.
-Clean up History section in particular; lots of awkward sentences
-Add more images/wikimedia etc.
-More information or list of works produced at the observatory