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Current Excerpt from "Hoplite" 3rd paragraph
The origins of the hoplite are obscure, and no small matter of contention amongst historians. Traditionally, this has been dated to the 8th century BC, and attributed to Sparta; but more recent views suggest a later date, towards the 7th century BC [citation needed].
What I'm adding
Slightly incorrect information, and a needed citation.
New Excerpt
The origins of the hoplite are obscure, and no small matter of contention amongst historians. Traditionally, this has been dated to the 8th century BC, and attributed to Sparta; but more recent views suggest a later date, towards 800 BC and has been used to explain the break down of the aristocratic Greek state[1].
Current Excerpt from "Hoplite warfare" 2nd paragraph
If battle was refused by one side, they would retreat to the city, in which case the attackers generally had to content themselves with ravaging the countryside around, since the campaign season was too limited to attempt a siege.[citation needed]
What I'm adding
More information about battle protocol and a citation for the fact about battle refusal.
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If battle was refused by one side, they would retreat to the city, in which case the attackers generally had to content themselves with ravaging the countryside around, since the campaign season was too limited to attempt a siege. Following protocol, battle was usually agreed upon by both sides.[2]
Current Excerpt from The Peloponnesian War