User:Dak/aids2
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NOTE: THIS ISN'T WIKIPEDIAS ARTICLE ON AIDS, THIS IS A TEMPORARY WORKING COPY FOR ME. FOR WIKIPEDIA'S ARTICLE, CLICK HERE --> AIDS
TODO:
dump article under below structure
inport/export stuff from the main articles? maybe split article into aids (condition) and have 'aids' be about aids in general/overview?
DO THINGS IN CAPITALS BELOW or shift them below 'suggest...'
think up good section names
spellcheck!
anchor old-section titles to newuns
current events tag to current epidemology (moves quite fast)
suggest replace article with this one and then:
drop lang. make sure useful to scientists, but readable by non-scientist. no unnessesary wordage. 'disease progression' rather than 'prognosis', etc.
make sure sciency (CD4+ etc) shit explained inline.
check citations (yuk)
use pyramid wrighting for going from simple --> sciency??????
general tidyage and improvement (picture captions, etc)
MUCH SMALLER LEDE GOETH HERE