Draft:Nguyen Ngoc Bich
Nguyen Ngoc Bich (1911–1966) was a hero of the Vietnamese resistance against the French colonists / From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Submission declined on 28 March 2023 by InterstellarGamer12321 (talk). This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.
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Submission declined on 3 March 2023 by Robertsky (talk). The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Robertsky 14 months ago. |
- Comment: The submission currently reads like a WP:ESSAY, and needs to copyedited significantly. The section titles should also be changed. InterstellarGamer12321 (talk | contribs) 17:35, 28 March 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: mixed referencing format. stick to one, either footnotes or inline citations. for biographies, it is highly encouraged to use inline citations. – robertsky (talk) 13:41, 3 March 2023 (UTC)